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for The Babysitter

by redqueeninwonderland

person ThisIsGreenDay
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O

AVA!!!
person coco and billie joe
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding me?! You can't do that!! You just can't! They finally saw each other, there might've been some hope...

Ahh too much suspense!! I need the next chapter now!
person Hannah
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I swear if she dies I will UGH. That would be too predictable though. Hmm. THANK YOU FOR FINALLY UPDATING. I wonder what's gonna happen now though...hmm...
person i can't believe it
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg:()
person Sierra
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so so so good! This is the story I've been wanting to read forever, and here it finally has materialized.
Many thanks, suga!
person coco and billie joe
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I fucking LOVE your story! This can't be one of the last chapters!! It needs to go on forever! lol
But seriously you are a great writer.
And Billie and Ava are getting back together right? :(

Oh and if Ava had an album I'd buy it. She kinda sounds like Fiona Apple. That's who I imagined singing those songs.
person kitt
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww...
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm...what can I say? I hope her dad's right. Please let Dad be right. Oh, God...must go cook and feel better about the whole situation. More more more please!
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh. that was so sad! it's not fair to keep us waiting like this!!!
person Sarah
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff* Hanging on your every word here.