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for The Babysitter

by redqueeninwonderland

person Rosh
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic shit. Update soon.
person A Big Fan...
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!!
It almost made me cry!
<333333 Your story!
person R
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa.

Was it a dream? Did he leave? What the hell is happening?! Is that the end? My God, that was good... Wow... Erm, what to say? Shit... Well, err, write again soon?!

Good stuff, best damn story on these boards.
person Druscilla Ryan
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Will come back and post reasonable update when I return to this dimension.

*chases Billie down and makes Ava and Billie kiss and make up*

*dies*
person Big Fan
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!????????
Is this the ending? Is he just going to LEAVE her like that???!!!!
NO!!! That's not fair!
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmm whhhaattt??
person Druscilla Ryan
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No. I'm crying. I agree with Ava. This is bad. No no no no no. Billie can't dump her. That's sad and I'll cry more and kill myself. You don't want my blood on your hands do you?

*dies*
person Kaylene
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Ava's really blown it now...excellent chapter....half of me hopes Billie won't forgive her....
person Sarah (KarmaKiller)
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes very bad ineed! The situation I mean. Fix theeeeeem! *begs*
person GreenDay4Prez
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I WANNA NO WHAT HAPPENS WITH BILLIE AND AVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!