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for The Babysitter

by redqueeninwonderland

person Autumn
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay update finally!!! and more Tre!!! yay!!! I LOOOOOOVE TRE!!!!
person Sreeti
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellently written. Descriptions are fantastic. Can't wait for more!
person GypsyQueen
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! this is awesome. I read the entire story today I just couldn't stop reading. The plot line is excellent and you have excellent description of your own characters and you give them depth and personality. This is some excellent work and i like your smut *drool*. Keep it up. UPDATE SOON! OMFG if you don't I might die
person TC
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Billie can so sing him,and Green Day ROCK !
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am back to leave a REAL review. I loved it. Ava was so well drawn. Of course she's going to get mad if Billie goes parental on her. It was completely and totally believable. (I hope she comes back, but I'm either picturing her bawling or a hospital room.) I loved how Billie went all parental though. Well, kind of. It really helped the plotline and it was just something I could see him doing. And Tre ... oooh, Tre. I love Tre. You know, you could put me in your story and have me marry Tre. (I'm kidding, I'm kidding.)

I'm so glad you updated, but please don't wait as long next time or I'm likely to have a nervous breakdown.
person Druscilla
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet Jesus. That girl is absolutely insane. Oh my God. Cliffhanger. What a bitch. Abso-fucking-lutely speechless. Jesus, Mary, and Joseph. I promise I'll leave a better review when I find my brain, kay?
person Bo + Dann
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really awesome story! Please keep it up, were loving every minute of it! ^_^ 1003127314/10! heheh

Lotsa loves: Bo + Danny
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person Autumn Y
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG LOVE ITTT!!! READ ALL 13 CHAPTERS!! NEED MORE ASAP GREEN DAY IT THE GREATEST EVER!!!!! im me if u want! Gdlives4ever17
<3 *AUTUMN* (tres3rd)
u need to put more Tre!!!
person Sanne
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im addicted. UPDATE fucking NOW!!
person Rosh
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, as always. Update soon.