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for Can't You See, My Darling

by TenshiNoReyire

person Anon
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
geeeee man, that was GREAT!! uhh i pissed my pants of laughing at the " groups of girls on the iinternet who have an iedea.....and FUKCIN YES; if im could SEE that actually..*mouthwatering* love your writing hoot ^^
person Shadow
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man that was great let me know of anyothers like it you made cuz I like your work
person StapleKitten
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Tee hee I read this lastnight and I'm reviewing today. I just think it could of been more detalied. I mean u could of added a bit more sex (when can u not??? lol) If u wanted to u deffiantly could add on and more chapters. I like see a lot of futures in store for this fanfic. . . tee hee master and slave any one? Well good luck! And lots of lemony yaoi kisses!!!

Jenifer
*Peace*Love*Happiness*
person yamiskoi
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude... this was, like, so fucking hot! You GOTTA write more about this couple, and no kiddin'! Argh?! Why am I speaking like a chav? Never mind, anyway, Sakura Camui, darling, PLZ!!! YOU HAVE TALENT, YOU MUST USE IT SO THAT WHEN BAM AND VILLE GET TOGETHER ONE TIME AT CASTLE BAM AND THEY SERACH FOR EACH OTHER'S NAMES, THEY COME UP WITH THIS FIC!!! Um... please? And then when they give you theirs emails, um... yeah. I have a problem about Bam x Ville. It's an addiction. But anywayz... keep writin', and I'll keep readin'!
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I really like that. Rather pointless smut... awesome. I love your stories... They're written sooo well. Great job!!