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I loved this story could you make a sequal that shows Brets Playgirl photo shoot

That was just so damn HOT! You have an amazing knack for writing some sexy Bret x Shawn fics, that's for sure. Ohhh, I especially liked Bret's wet dream segment. That was great. :D I love your damn fics! lol <3

Well. Not quite the take I would have given their relationship but i like it

This was a great story! I love the pairing and I thought that it was a very cute, fun read.

You do realize, however, that you must write a Shawn x Axl now!

I love this fic. It's also nice too see this rather unusual pairing. You certainly pulled out all the stops to portray them as well as you did. It's sweet and extremely funny, and very well written. The build up of the story is excellent. I'm pretty sure everyone knew what was going to happen the next minute, but the teasing story flow had us all wanting to keep reading none the less. Your characterization was off the charts. The stubbornness was hilarious, and you kept them just on this side of parody to make them really entertaining in a non-cheap way. The fic had some really good moments and lines in it...