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OKAY, SO LISTEN. WE HAVE READ MANY STORIES FAR AND WIDE IN THE DIR EN GREY CATOGORY, BUT FOR SOME REASON, WE CAN NEVER SEEM TO FORGET THE STORY WHERE KYO WONT SEEM TO LET GO OF TOTCHI WHILE SLEEPING AND HOW HE SEDUCES HIM FEIGHING INNOCENCE. IT SEEMS SO BELIEVABLE THAT WE JUST CAN'T HELP BUT WANT TO READ MORE. SO UPDATE!!! DON'T LEAVE US HANGIN!!! TOTCHI IS KYO'S TEDDY BEAR!!! YOU MUST ADD MORE!!! DON'T BE DISCOURAGED IF NOT MANY HAVE REVIEWED, AMERICA IS LAZY!!! WHAT CAN YOU DO? BUT YOU'RE STORY IS AMAZING AND YOUR FANS DEMAND MORE!!! SO YOU HAVE TO OBEY!!!!..........right?..........YEAH!!!! YOU HAVE TO!!!!..........PWERRTY PWEASE.........
LOVE ALWAYS, YOU'RE ADORING FANS WHO CARE,
CASSIE AND MEGAN

It's sooo funny :D I'm laughing all the time I'm reading it.. I just can see Kyo and Totchi sleeping.. how cute... :P

You must do a second chapter with a sex scene please. ONEGAII!!!! *gets on knees and starts begging* It's a necessity and they are such a cute couple. Great story too. It's a teaser and that is the reason you must add a chapter.

you must write more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was wonderful!!! The only critacism that I have is that it's not continued!........WHY!? Kyo and Toshiya is my favorite pairing and there's not a lot of stories on here with that pairing and I finally find a good one and it's over so quickly! If you don't want me to be miserable and stay entertained you will continue writing on due to popular demand!!! And you can add more detail about kyo and totchi...if you know what I mean ^_*

Wow! I loved it! It was put together well with an awesome writting stlye! I hope you write more too it it would be fun to see how Totchi's and Kyo's relationship would progress! Espeacially since Tothi seemed to think all he had was motherly feelings for Kyo! I wonder how long Kyo had been having lustful feelings for Totchi! Well I can't wait to read lots more of your stories!

I usually don't like this pairing very much but your fic is just so cute and sweet ^o^
Like your Kyo-kun =P
Please write more,you're good ^__^

oh this is good. a sequel perhaps? leaves cookie

Sweet, Toshiya was adorable, and Kyo as well ^_^

Aaww yeah! Another great fic.... although *looking randomly to the sides as someone who doesn't wants the thing* you could have deepened the lemon part XD
But, it's your fic, and, it's already good as it is ^__^.
Once again, good to have you back again!
Continue!