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for Better Days

by Kashshaptu

person Fulya
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw this fic is so awesome! Ill be looking forward for the next chapter because its so well written and charming ^_^. I loved it please update soon! XD

<3
Fulya
person Julia
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While Shinya's my favourite I love this fic^^ I just want to read MORE :D I'm waiting for next chapter...^^
person Chipup
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-growls evilly- I WANT MORE, Dang it! MOREEEEEE. -dies- And i think Shin Shin should Sneak to dies house when ever he gets out...just because he can and feels like it. lol. mawahahahahahahahahaha I want shinya to feel a bit better too. -hugs shinya-
person Nessan
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG ;_; <3~so much
don't take that long to get the 3° chapter done, plis XD
i wanna know what is happening XD~~

nhaaa \o\ kiss.
person Sakuchan
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic of your,it's really sweet ^_^
And Die is a perfect doctor,with that smile ^^
Good job!
person October Rain
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is awesome! I love the emotion the the first person really puts you in their minds (only adding to the greatness).

Do update soon, I definitely gotta find out what happens.
person David
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I'm impressed, really. I only read bits and pieces over your shoulder once in a while, but never the whole story. I like it. I really do. In fact, I can't think of a bloody negative thing to say. Well, nothing substantial anyway. Personally I'm not really fond of the use of japanse words, even though hardly present, well, I've just got the feeling they don't really belong in the text. But that's me, doesn't really disturb me or anything. Overall it was a good read, story seems interesting, vocabulairy-wise it's top notch. In my opinion it's not really nessecary to hit 'Return' after each phrase, but if you think it makes things more readable I guess that'your call.
It's a well written story you've got here, Emma. To be honest I didn't expect it to be 'this' good.
*kiss*
Please continue writing, you're good at it. o.o