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for Games Of Make Believe

by SavageWords

person cheryl
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 11! Hot!
person Anne
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the part with Gerry screaming out "I love her!" And Andrew was like you just figured that out. Lol. God... anything that Gerry does is hot. Lucky Emmy... Update soon please!
person Kitty Felone (not logged in)
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes... his voice turns me on alone!
person LunaKitty
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need more. Want more. Give me more!!! That was very hot. Can't wait till the next chapter.
person Lily
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love it! You should really add another chapter because I really just can't get enough of it!
person nocturne
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, this is awesome. ^^ I love it!
person MadameG
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WELL!
YOU GOT ME WITH YOUR STORY!
YOU MUST CONTINUE IT! ITS GOOD!
I WANTED TO READ A FIC LIKE THAT AND NO ONE SEEMED TO GET THE GUTS TO DO IT...! IM GLAD YOU DID!
CONGRATS!

person Lily
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! that was one of the most sexual things i had ever read. write more. i love it!
person CHERYL
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU TEASE! Next chapter. This is soooo sweet!
person Kitty Felone (too lazy to log in)
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NAAHHH!!! more! MORE!!!! *sobs* I caught up and that was all.... damn it! >_