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for Games Of Make Believe

by SavageWords

person Whistling Nightingale
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story and keep reading what you have so far over and over again. I do hope everything is alright with you because this is a wonderful piece of fanfiction and I really hope you'll continue to write. I hope with all this encouragement you'll take up to writing another chapter because I swear I'm already addicted to this tale and wish you would continue again.
person Sander
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass story! I love it! You make is seem all to real, very much in character, they way your write, you should try Originals, write your own story and try for publishing, your forshadowing is wonderful! I am some what dissapointed, I see the last time you updated was in October of last year, I do so hope you decide to continue, if not her somewhere else. If you have the full story on some other site could you send me the link or the rest on your computer, I really want know how the rest of Emmy and Gerard's story turns out! You may email me at PinkAnthem@yahoo.com, that is my primary email address, you can also find me at http://www.myspace.com/Sanderstokes

your story was the first Gerard Butler story I have read and I have to say, you set the bar very high as far a fiction writing goes, my expectaions have risen after reading Game of Make Believe. Well done, I look foreward to both hearing from you and seeing more fiction
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic!! Great work.
person callen5
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must be really busy, but I hope you'll update soon. I love your stories. They're very well written.
person Marie
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry that our authoress is having life issue BUT very pleased that she has not dumped this fine story. A well written story does not come along every day and when we readers endeavor to follow a story we put our trust in the author that they are planning to finish it. Life intrudes though and we have to be patient and hopeful that it will be continued. Take care dear authoress. I will be meditating on the hope that your muse (and good health) will be returning to you soon. Besides, Gerry and Emmy have been left in a rather embarrassing situation: him exposed and her trying to shield what they'd been up to (actually he was the one who was 'up').
person anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SavageWords:
We will wait patiently for you. Good luck and remember everybody needs an escape, even you!
take it easy
person Koda
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[22:52] x1screamsayonara: Yo, uhm.. This is Koda from AFF.
[22:52] SavageWord: hey
[22:52] x1screamsayonara: I was just wondering, as alot of people are... Are you ever going to continue Games of Make Believe? :3
[22:53] SavageWord: Yea, I've had some family issues and haven't really been in the mood to write lately so I'm taking a small break
[22:53] x1screamsayonara: Ooh, alright. It's been awhile, so I was just seeing. That cliffhanger killed all of us. xP
[22:53] SavageWord: lol yea I know, I need to start writing again, but its been so crazy around here
[22:54] x1screamsayonara: Mind if I post this conversation, as a review? Just to let people know that you do plan on continuing it?
[22:54] SavageWord: oh sure
[22:54] x1screamsayonara: Mmk, thanks. ^^;
[22:54] SavageWord: not a problem

Okay people, she DOES plan on continuing it! Don't give up hope, yet!
person scarletdolce
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is THE best I have read in a long time. I'm sorry to hear about your shoulder. I hope that you're feeling well. But it's been months since you last updated, and frankly, I'm getting a little scared you ended this. And just when the story was getting good, it's gone. Please come back for the sake of your devoted readers, and this absolute pairing. Please give us a sign that you're coming back. We'd love to hear you.
person The Lurker
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOD. this is like....wow. i stayed up like for 5 hours reading this. holy crap. first of all, hate the cliffie you left. but second, just let me say wow. this is the most intense story i have ever read. serious, had me fanning myself with a piece of paper. quite the talented smut writer, yes? ^_^ hehe. not only that, but i love the emotion and real live situations you put them in. continue! .....or else :-P

-The Lurker
person anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hope you are feeling well enough to update/finish this off!