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for Games Of Make Believe

by SavageWords

person CADCoe
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazin, captivating,very enticing (HOT), want more, NEED MORE of these characters, PLEASE !!!!!! Heard of a hurt shoulder, I'm sorry, hope you get better. But in the mean time......dictate and I'll type ! (smile) NO, I'M SERIOUS ! You are VERY imaginative and a good fictionist. Don't let go of this story, give it an ending. Loved it (bet you couldn't tell, *smile*).
person Marcie
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even if it is just one more chapter, this fic needs a finish and us loyal readers need closure.
person BlueVixen2071
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A-ha! Wonderful! ^_^ VERY creative! I'm already hooked after the 1st chapter, which is NO easy task! Unfortunately, I've gotta go...but I'll hopefully finish soon! ;0)
person Karrie
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this when are you going to continue...I'm on pins and needles waiting...lol
person Cecile
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even if it's just one more chapter; could you finish up this story? Your readers have been left hanging, not to mention Gerry and Emmy.
person Isabella
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are okay! Please update soon, it's been months and we are all aching!
person Anne
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear about your arm! I hope you feel better soon. And maybe a couple chapters for us patience readers? *big eyes* Pretty please?
person rebecca
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear about your shoulder! Heal well! and update!! This is a wonderful story.
person Katlin
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update, and finish this story. You've done such a fine job of writing it so far....please don't dump it before it is done. Your readers love it. Even if it is just one more chapter, please complete it, for yourself and us readers.
person Koda
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, just as you hit a cliffhanger, you stop writing. :\