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for Games Of Make Believe

by SavageWords

person Libby
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where did you go? Why aren't you updating? I MISS THIS STORY!!!! :'(
person Sara Jane
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a refreshingly wonderful story. Your writing is so good. Thank you for sharing this with the readers which includes me. I hope you will continue it.
person Libby
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story. Thanks for writing it. I just love it.
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, simply brilliant. I love your work!! Plus, I will start worshiping you from now on!! *lol*
person Succubus
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god. *needs a glass of water* That was hot!!! I mean hot as in I kept saying, 'Oh my God', over and over. You are a great writer and you should update soon. I could see Emmy and Gerard getting together like that and I loved your recent chapter. I started to laugh out loud as they got caught. Good job. :D
person erikslover
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story so much....please, please, please update!!! I'm begging you...
person Emmy Butler
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for a few chapters now, and I must tell you that I think that you are a phenomenal writer!
You have a gift for description and making your characters three dimensional. I am enthralled by this story of "what if" and cannot wait until the next update, which I hope will be very soon. Keep up the good work!
person Cat
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, and written so beautifully. I hope you update...soon!
person Jamie
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I just came across your story and I read it right through from chapter 1, it's completely addictive!!! You have an excellent writing style and I'm reaaaalllly looking forward to the next chapter!
person Anne
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea update! OMG! LMAO! Oh man oh man.... I love to see the explanation for this one. Hee hee. Update soon please!