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for Games Of Make Believe

by SavageWords

person Colleen
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and not jsut for the sexy stuff (although the sexy stuff is great). I laughed my head off at the end part when they got caught. It was only a matter of time since they were in a rather public place. I waited for this new chapter, and it was well worth the wait. Thank you for this wonderfully amusing and HOT story, dear Author.
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger!
Please update soon I'm dying to know what is going to happen next.

Katy
person Lily
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. I liked the end when Cassandra caught them. Please add more soon!
person xxxxx
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLLYYYYY !!!! An Update!!! WOOOO! lol This is still very good!!! Update soon
person Koda
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking GOD. That is so awful words cannot even describe it. Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa..
person Kitty Felone
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughing hysterically* At first I was freaking out, thinking it would be somebody more important, but then it turned out to be Cassandra and I can't stop laughing!!! My mascara's running I'm laughing so hard!!! Haha!!! Talk about walking in at the wrong place and the wrong time!
person Stasia526
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha, well if there was any doubt before. Glad to see you updated. Its been a while and I was getting worried you stopped writing this one.
person Sassy
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, how they gonna explain this one now...=P I love Gemmy stories. Please update soon, I gotta know!! XD
person darkstorm888
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow gerry is such an animal in ur story which i love, keep up the good work.....update soon plez
person Keri
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is definitely the best story I've ever read on AFF.Net. You are a very talented writer, I love the fact that you make it so realistic, like it could just happen any second. I adore the chemistry between Emmy and Gerry in POTO and I'm so happy you wrote a fic about them for real life. Please update soon! Your story is great and I honestly and truly can't wait for more! :)