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for Games Of Make Believe

by SavageWords

person Debs
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW!!!!! I absoutly loved this. I can just see Gerry being so cheeky but lovable at the same time. Loved the wanking on the bed scene, fwoor hot! very good, can't wait to read some more of your writings. Cheers, Debs xxx
person challen
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw. Come on. Update.
person Kitty Felone (too lazy and too CRAZY to log in)
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo.... this'll be good. I once did it in the back of a warehouse and the cars driving down the main road in the front could see, since the road went off at a distance. So yeah, frighteningly enough, I gave off a show... *shivers in rememberance of it*
person Colleen
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is written beautifully, and the idea is original. It's pure fluff, and I don't know why I like it so much, I just know I do. Thanks for writing this.....wonderful pure escapism.
person challen
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok. tonya's a grown up. she's got bucks. she can stay in a hotel. get rid of her. how rude anyway!!!!
person Koda
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't they smell of sex? Buut. Greatgreatgreat chapter.
person Anne
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I would kill to have a guy who a letter every week, especially Gerry's. Lol. This is one secret that will be hard to keep since Tonya and Cassandra suspect something. Update soon please!
person layla
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG YAY!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! I WAS BEGINING TO THINK YOU FORGOT LOL !!!! OR WERN'T GOING TO AHHH LOL THIS IS FAR BY THE BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ ON HERE KEEP GOING!!!
person xxxxx
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember if I read this chapter already but IT IS SOOOOOO GOOD!!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!
person Kitty Felone (too lazy to log in)
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggled maddeningly* !!!! Hehehehe.... I couldn't stop laughing throughout this WHOLE chapter!!!! Gerard James Butler!!! Hahahaha!! Poor guy has SO much pent up anger!!! *snickers*