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for The Heartless

by TenshiNoReyire

person yamiskoi
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an ud! great job sweetie, nice way of making the reader feel sorry for ville, btw. you're good at the provacative stuff. ^^ Anyway, please ud soon! Have fun writing.
person Rai
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm- This will be interesting indeed!
I didnt know how far it would go but Im glad you continued it.
Cant wait for the next chapter
person Jade
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I find it funny how most authors make Ville's sexuality some secret matter that would shock the public, despite the fact that he is openly bi--I'm pretty sure his fans wouldn't be too shocked to find out he had a boyfriend, lol. But I like this story, I think that everyone's been in a situation like this (if not as extreme) at least once in their lifetimes, and it makes it easy to relate to. It'll be interesting to see where you take this.
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting beginning. Please update soon.
person sugar plum
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this seems to be a wonderful story,
please update soon!!!!
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This isn't Ville/Bam is it...? I love your fics but...
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry...