rate_review Reviews

I loved it, I thought it would be Matt and Christian but I guess I was wrong. This is definitely worthy of a sequel. :)

i absolutely loved it and you should totally write a sequel and soon

This is a very sweet story, I like how they have real relationships and are comfortable with them.

that was good

I think this was a lovely fic. I liked the way you had split it into segments, taking turns with the couples. Personally I think you could've used a bit more time with each couple and use a bit more description. I know you had to keep it vague in order to keep the secret, but other things... Like this the effect was a bit bleak. Just a suggestion, but if you do write the sequel, which would be great, you should try to build a bit more ambience to the story. Otherwise your writing style is good with a nice poetic touch to it.