rate_review Reviews

That was actually very well done. I was expecting something a bit less tasteful, just because of the subject matter, but it was a good story. I especially like that they were free at the end. Good job.

This is an awesome fanfic! Not only did you write it so that the characters had personalities (unlike so many other AFF's), but you developed the story well. The end seemed too abrupt (i.e. why would they put so much hope in him, it's not like they were naive ladies) but it was a well-written story.

Thank you for a wonderful read!

Man, I came to this section deperately seeking Grobie slash, since most of the het is horrid Mary Sue. Your fic was a pleasant and welcome surprise. Very very light on the mistakes, and with an interesting not-quite-a-saint Josh (though his charitable nature is shining through the whole time). I found myself actally caring what happened to the three women and I got a good laugh out of your JJ-abuse (she's a gold-digging wench) and your Lucia cameo. Nice work, no doubt. I'm glad I have JG het a chance. Thanks :D

You are the answer to a prayer! That was wonderful -- sweet, sexy, and funny. I liked the three female characters, and enjoyed the way you depicted Josh. Please write more Josh fics!

Love,
Falcon