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for Punishment

by Crowesaga

schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it. book marked it. hope you write more to it. :D
person malcara
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoah pretty good some grammar errors but overall well written the grammar is easily forgiven though since english isn't your first language i findmyself wanting to read more so update soon please ^^
person Llama
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meep. That rather scared me. But what scared me more was thatI could actually picture poor Orlando pregnant...it's enough to give you nightmares. Anyway. Good show and all that.. and also..you're beta reader missed just a few little things. So you might wanna check that out. I'll be back for the others..
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this and I can't wait for more!