rate_review Reviews

Best story ever (besides the babysitter that is). Anyways, it's so accurate, it just sounds so incharacter, exactly how they would react in the given situation. You're so skilled it's not even mentally stable anymore. It makes me sad it's over. .. . .

I'm reading it!
This is every bit as good as The Babysitter, and people should recognise that.
So yes, I've been scouring this site, along with a couple others, making my way through the rancid shit to get to the good stuff.
You and Drusilla (Drucilla? I've forgotten) have made it all worth it.
Your sex scenes are the hottest fucking things I've ever read. Pure panty melters.
I can't stress enough how much I love the fact that you have a good grasp on spelling and grammar.
I love your style of writing, there's such a stark contrast to the way you portrayed Billie in The Babysitter to how you've shaped him out in this one, and yet they're both so realistic.
You also have a good grasp on your characters. Not fucked up enough to the point where it's got a reverse Mary Sue vibe, and not perfect either.
But shades of grey. Just like life.
I thank you, and hope you keep up the good work.

I know it's been awhile but you have to update this story, it's one of my favorites :)

Jesus woman I want your talent!! I love all your stories, but this one I do have a soft spot for, I hope you wont leave it at this! Thank you for keeping me sane with your writing x)

Wow, I really like this story. I had read the one before this, but this one adds so much more to the it. What is Legs' real name, and what is going to happen between her Tre and Billie? I truly enjoy this story and now I'm off to go read The Babysitter. Update soon please!

keeeeep....gooo-iiingg....

Awesome. Totally awesome. More more more!

Oh dear... I fear I've become rather addicted to your writing it seems. *beam*

I just... can't get over your characterizations. The just blow my mind. As wonderful and sweet and -believable- Billie was in babysitter, he's equally as believable as this fucked up user who doesn't realize how badly he's messing with the girl's head. Oddly enough a lyric occurs to me.

I heard it all before
So don't knock down my door
I'm a loser and a user so I don't need no accuser
to try and slag me down because I know you're right
So go do what you like
Make sure you do it wise
You may find out that your selfdoubt means nothing
was ever there

You can't go forcing something if it's just
Just not right

No time to search the world around
Cause you know where I'll be found
When I come around
When I come around

Wonderful, really. Absolutely fucking wonderful!

you should update this storie it was amzing oh. yeah. and you should recheck your spelling also!!!!!

This story is fantastic. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.