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for My Immortal

by SpiderUnderTheGlass

person blueinferno
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i dunno if i already reviewed for this...but tis pretty damn good! I wouldn't mind if you updated though *whines*
person anon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update soon
person ME ME ME MEohh...and ian
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI....MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...\ohh.....hyde is funny when drunk
person laamberry
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG, I GOT MENTIONED! O___O squeeee!! *hides behind Gackt* ....wow ;_; i'm brought to tears (okay ALMOST) yay,yay,yay! the lowly fan is talked to by the cool author personage < 3 nyaahhh~ i would so talk to you on MSN but for some reason it isn't working today...maybe it died o_o oh no!....*plays with gackt's Sho braids* well..i tottaly adore the new chapter! 8D i felt like i was drunk too with hyde ._. dunno why...but thinking about booze makes me all....woodawoollaawwoooo~~ @_@....understand? ._. uhh.....nevermind, i doubt you do >.> i'm a strange one alright....ooh ooh! write more write more! 8D i am waiting~.........oh and hey =_= *munch munch* these cupcakes are stale................damn it, i have been fooled.

bye bye!!! take care of Gakuto and HYDE-chan for me! oh...and i sugest not putting them in the same room (>///<) they will do bad bad thiiings....so make sure you have a video camera set up first, okay?
person Shu
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is a very sweet story, i love it and I'd loveto know what happened next!
VEry adorable!
Hope you'll update soon!
And yeah for cute dancing drunk Hyde... tiny lil ting he is!

Shu
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I'm experiencing the warmest and fuzziest feelings I've ever had. Thank you so much. *blushes*
This chapter was very entertaining and quite amusing; I had a feeling that Hyde would be a giggly drunk and you certainly didn't disappoint the reader in that. Too bad the after effects were so nasty. The poor boy has a naive streak a mile wide, but that only works to make him that much more sweeter. Your Gackt is once again the master of the mood swings, and in this chapter he seems rather reserved when around Hyde, well, at least a conscious Hyde. Then again, that might be due to the fact that he's contrasted against an extremely animated Hyde or because he's just down on his funk. The way you show how much he still misses Mana is very nice, and all in all you've managed to avoid some of the tackiest vampire fic clichés, something that is very commendable.
person Siarra
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops, that was my review. Apparently I got timed out and it showed up anonymous. *grumbles*
person Xmasrose
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story and oh my god I love Coheed and Cambria too! I love their new video 'the suffering'. ^_^
person Matt & Ian
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say....i love it.....i feel im in the story..and i love how the characters are progressing thus far,,,(i thin were in love with gackt and hyde)

(ps....its tooo short)
person ladygizarme
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, new chapter! insight into gackt's thoughts is very good, and drunk-hyde next ch?? can't wait! ^__^