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wooaaaahhh o___o i am....so in awe of you *bows before your mightyness* i myself am writeing a book...and i have been baseing some of my writeing structure off of you. your story is GOD!! and i--....wait....LEEHOM SANG "LAST NIGHT"?! o______o i....i didn't know!! and i've watched that movie more then physically possible! omg omg omg omg!!!!........................see? you teach me many things. ;;_;; please....write.....WRITE LIKE THE WIND!!!! oh, and AIM me some time so i can be all like " hey...>.> whats gonna happen next? well? hmm?" and worship some more 8D.......now wheres my cupcake? (=_=)/ bye bye.

- Laamberry

Again, a slightly calmer chapter but by no means in a bad way. It builds up the story wonderfully and adds to the chemistry between the characters. I like how the akwardness between them is slowly turning into friendship, and it's obvious that there's room for more further down the line. Now that we have a good grip on your characterization of Gackt, he's a much more likeable on the whole as we don't have to worry about his angle. Also it's nice to see him having feelings again. He's a tad bit dramatic but entirely in a good way, fitting his character well. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Hyde, I can only imagine all the possibilities...
As a hint; You'd save yourself from a bunch complaints of if you were a little more specific about Gackt's vampiric traits, such as his "vampire senses" and his diet. You mentioned drinking blood but also he's going to a restaurant for people food. Some people are unbelievably picky about that sort of thing...

yay! a gackt/hyde vamp fic!! wooot!! i like it so far, though it's kinda sad mana wasn't in it more but oh well, gackt/hyde is too kawaii... and other than some typos and missing words/grammar errors here and there, i think you're doing excellent ^__~ i hope you write more sooooon

oooh! I love your story! I'm looking forward to reading more of it!

Hey Jamie-kat-mom,
:Waves repeatedly in a hyper manor: I <3 you, you know that right. This is good. Really good. I can tell because... I don't know the fandom, but I still like it... a lot. I hope nano doesn't interfer too much... should have used it as your nano and cheated... LOL no cheating is bad. Well I love you and I like this. so well... see ya tomarrow at schoo.

Great chapter....I really love this story....^o^

I was so happy to come back from my evil exams and find that it had been updated....twice....I be teh lucky.
Anyway...keep up the good work and please update again soon. I love how Gackt is treating Hyde in this....so cute.

Ja ne
^o^

Cool, I like this chapter very much. The beginning was awesome, like from a good horror movie, and the rest of the chapter played itself out very nicely. The mood was mellower than in the previous ones but by no means too slow. It was great and let us get to know your characterization of Hyde very well. I'm not quite sure what to make of Gact so far because of the mood swings he seem to go through but I'm certain that will pass as we learn more about his current storyline. The dialogue was awesome and well fitting to the circumstances, further making your Hyde a very endearing character. You also have a real talent for build up and description and lucky for us, you're not afraid to use it.

I like it, but i'm a tad confused. Is Gack a vampire? and Hyde's normal right?
anyway i'm waiting for the next chap!

Wow. So far this story seems very interesting. You've built the settings deliciously and as a whole, your writing is nice to read. Unfortunately there are quite a few misspellings, some of which can easily spoil the mood. Also it would seem that you're a bit shy when it comes to writing violence, as there is a line between being poetic and being avoiding. The characters so far are very intriguing and they seem like they cold really grow on the reader in the long run. I can't wait to get more to read, and especially see the plot played out because so far this fic has been nothing short of addicting.

Well, I think you really should continue this story! It sounds promising! ^^ And you have a good way expressing your story, I'd really love to read more. Peace.