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for Another Innocent Face

by NHB

person syntheticillusion
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is number...6 I think, in my ongoing saga to read everything you've written. Brilliant! I love your writing! Its AMAZING! Fantastic! I love how you made it sibling rivalry. I love it!
person BlackCat9
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. just wow. Is there going to be an update? Please?...i say again, wow. I really love it.

-BlackCat9
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot... very "angsty" Keep writing it, it kicks candy ass.
person poe
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit this fic is amazing! i'm so glad you updated! i know how hard it is when you're in school too, but please PLEASE for the love of GOD keep updating!!! you are an AMAZING author, and if you quit writing this story i will die! seriously, good work, keep it up!!!! :)
person TaintedMonroe
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to log in, heh. But movin' along...I freakin' love this story. I love this more than bunnies. And that's a lot. Lol, but anyways..Continue please?? Pleeeease?? ::big innocent watery eyes::
person poe
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really really like your writing! everything just flows so smoothly, the imagery and the sentences....please add more, i would love to read what is going to happen next! oh, and the whole "mikey isn't as innocent as everyone thinks" card is so hot and strangely original! keep it up! :)
person Sarkywoman
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice and dark, I like your characterisation. I loved the line that went something like 'Gerard fucked it all up when he decided to go get pretty.'