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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no fluf overload..PERFECT! and I willl b sure to check out you and your friends new slash website.........(hard) LOVE YOU!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending . . .fluff is GREAT! Great work!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, perfect. It was perfect. It was a great ending. Sweet, but not perfect. I mean, it WAS perfect as in the fact that it wasn't perfect. You don't understand a single fucking thing I'm saying. It was great and I loved the humor at the end and I'm just picturing that cute little scene now and I'm glad it worked out with Tre. And I love that whole line about sustaining, even though my favorite thing was when they were talking about dumping Billie Joe in the shower. Don't know why. Don't ask. It just stuck with me. So, there's my hopeless ramble. Hope you actually get something from it. Can't wait for another story!!!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, that sex scene was great. I, personally, loved it. Is there more to this story? I really hope so; it's wonderful.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huge fucking smiles. I FUCKING LOVED THAT! It wasn't sex entered just to enter sex, which was perfect. I loved the prelude, with the 'did you feel that'. Oh, God. Wow. And the sex was . . . fucking hot. And I know it sounds really weird to say it, but my favorite part was actually those first kisses and when Mike says he wants Billie Joe to scream. Am I a freak for saying that? I just loved how emotionally charged those few lines were.
I love you!
I love you!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
deliciously fluffy!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad sex scene writer? Are you MAD, that was so great! I loved the fluff tossed in too, you're a great writer!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Man I love this. Keep it coming pleeeease, it's great.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So wonderful. billie is broken and mike will fix him, just perfect. im so proud of you and all your rave reviews.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it, loving it! Please write more soonies! xxx