Oh my GOD!!!!!!!!! This left me screaming and begging for more! It was SO interesting to read about Bernie being a virgin. And hilarious to see Elton so stoked about girls. But you really seemed to capture EJ's and BT's personalities. The whole "brother" bond was so precious and it was so convincing because Elton really does say that Bernie is like a brother to him. And the whole buildup before the sex scene was gorgeous. The way Elton and Bernie cried together, it was so emotional and really moving. I adore the way you captured their trust in each other, how Elton seemed it was broken, and was so hurt, not udnerstanding where Bernie came from. It's definetly the kind of friendship I wish I had though lol. And the sex scene itself was highly commendable. It was amazing how short the scene was relative to the other scenes, at yet it was poured with just as much detail, not leaving the reading questioning for more. It was simple and to the point, but so satisfying to read how Elton and Bernie came (at least to me) lol. Bernie's naiveness was adorable and Elton's emotion was powerful. So much passion in one story, I loved it! And I would really love if you made another Elton fanfic, because it's so refreshing to read an Elton fanfiction where somone actually knows who the hell they're writing about! Lol! Thanks for the epic read!
This ain't your usual Jerk-Off-And-Go fic. You'd better have some time on your hands (and I mean that both metaphorically and literally ;))
A total change of atmosphere compared to "The Oddest Discovery". This time it's one of the dark, but deliciously hot variety. The catchy dialogue's still here, the humour's intact, but it's not all sugar plums and faeries..uh, scratch 'faeries' ;). The character's are pretty complex for a story of this genre and length, and, as usual -it's not just about the sex (which, may I add-- is delightfully served with an amount of swinging and extreme emotions). IMO, one of the best one's Heh Pox (can I stick to Elwhis?) has written. Give it a shot- I honestly reccomend it, my dears.:)
cheers,
The Cookie Monster ;)
The Cookie Monster