rate_review Reviews

Keep going. I love it. Its hot.

Thank you for this fic... Everyone seems to make 80 to be a bitch or soon to be ex-wife just to get her out of the way.. She would have to be aware of Billie's bisexuality (he's never hidden it)..also being a Human sexuality student when they met and Mike is the obvious choice...

@__@ oh wow that was good. I was actually able to feel the emotion in this xD; its funny, I felt the same way after what 80 said @__@ very well written x3

Awwww! That was sad. But good. Definitely original.

Holy s-h-i-t. Wow. I like it. Is it over? I couldn't really tell. Hey, I want you to email me. I love your story so much and it's great and I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but you could use a beta to tweak it. I think your message gets lost a little bit with the punctuation and stuff. And it's a great message, so it shouldn't be lost. Email me if you're interested! Keep up the good work. This was great. Never really seen this situation before.

It's awesome.

Oooooo. God that was sweet. What's with everyone in the world being able to write kids well except for me? Gah.

I like it. It's good. I want to read more. That first chapter was hilarious. Warning you, though. They're going to take down all stories without disclaimers at the end of the month. If you don't want your story taken down, put one up. Luvverzz!