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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm hooked. You need to write more. I love the characters and Johnny's dry sense of humor. I can just see good things coming out of this. Please continue!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheh I like this, I like the writing and Johnny's funny, especially when he's talking to him self! You really focus on his fame problems...ahahh....of course hearing about that always makes me guilty...*looks around room at all the JD posters* yea guilty......
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far so good.... keep up the good work
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent beginning to an intriguing story. Well developed, complex female character, with a very accurate portrayal of social anxiety. Language skills far above average. Gawd, I sound like an English teacher!
Anyway, I hope you keep going with this because I definitely want to read more. The boredom you mentioned in your disclaimer has produced something truly wonderful. Would it be awful to hope you keep feeling at least a little bored so you write more?
Anyway, I hope you keep going with this because I definitely want to read more. The boredom you mentioned in your disclaimer has produced something truly wonderful. Would it be awful to hope you keep feeling at least a little bored so you write more?