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by druscillaryan

person emily
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's beautiful. . . i love how you've matched up the perfect lyrics to the paragraphs. well done. . it was extremely touching and realistic.
person longveiw_chick
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Call me longveiw_chick... or Laura. (I'm from livejournal.com/community/_comingclean_)


now for the comment...


DAMN YOU BILLIE JOE!!!!!!


what A little fucker! No note?! Thats fucking cruel to Mike.

NICE job on the story!!! I love angst, now because of you and rebel_whatsername.
person Hannah
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah... didnt see that one coming.... that was too sad!
person tre_cool_is_my_homeboy129
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you did my absolute favorite song. and dammit you made me cry again. i did NOT expect that ending. at all. you are good.
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That Story Is So Emotional. So Many Emotions.

Love It. <3
person Aeris
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was my personal favorite out of everything you've ever written. I feel like crying now, that was kinda depressing. I feel so sorry for Mike! You're like the most awesome author out there! Keep it up! Oh yeah just call me Aeris
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's so beautiful. I cried on the last bit. Why'd he have to kill himself? It was so horrible. Poor Mike.
person Lore_Lowell
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...God...

"Angst" would be an understatement, my friend.

Nonetheless, it was excellent. I feel like crying...!
person Kaylene
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was....amazing...and sort of depressing.....I love your writing, I'm a bit slack and don't review everything you write....for which I feel guilty about....but I have read every single story you have put on here and loved every single one....
person Rebel_whatsername
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful . . .sad, but beautiful. As always, I am patiently awaiting your next piece of work!