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for A Kiss on the Corner of My Mouth

by druscillaryan

schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck. Fuckity Fuck Fuck...haha i love that line. well except for the whole God is fucking dead line this story is pretty awesome.
person Faith
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God's a good fucker, I'm sure. It's a great story though still
person tre_cool_is_my_homeboy129
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful. i love the young billie/mike 's.
person Aeris
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Reading that had just really, I mean really made me wonder if god really is real. I don't think I've believed in it in a couple of years now. Anyways another good one! Keep it up!
person Shora
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautifull!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sarah (KarmaKiller)
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear to god (or do I you fucking puritans?!? sorry. lol. I love you. anyways...), if you get any more original Im going to have to...like...tie you down and have my way with you.
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!


how the story ends up being reallyyyy positive, but ending with "god is dead." beautiful.
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuckity fuck fuck! No offence but the cursing could be toned down a bit, other than that it was "fucking poetic" true or not, i thought it was great. Could always be beytter, but it was good enough to get my attention and make me respond.
person Lore_Lowell
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't believed in God for a long time now, and that story was just another reason for me not to believe it. I think your logic's right. And don't worry, I won't ask. ;D
person Rebel_whatsername
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, niiiiiice!! Loved it, of course! lol, I think "fuckity fuck fuck" has now become my new favorite expression!