rate_review Reviews

Hmm this was kinda weird. I've never really read many crossovers, but decided to read this one coz it was BDSM (lol)
It was well written, but the way it was in such large paragraphs was really hard to read. Especially now with AFFs new layout.
Hope you post more of this! It was good. That cat seemed a bit strange though, ne? I have cats and they barely even respond to their names, so it seems very unlikely a cat would be able to do stuff like that. (Sorry, the unrealisticness of it irked me slightly)

Oh ya I was also gonna mention the exclamation marks but forgot coz I have a bad memory ^^;; It kinda made sense at the beginning because they were at a club and all, ya know, needed to be heard over the music, but when it kept going... eh..
& yea also the spelling/grammar was a bit confusing at times.

uh... overuse of exclamation points. It makes it seem like everyone is constantly yelling

There are some very nice aspects to this fic. The setting is cool and the kink is just delicious. Unfortunately the whole package suffers a great deal when it comes to the out put. The block formatting without any kinds of paragraphs is a bitch to read and the readers tend to avoid it like the plague, so the numbers on the hit counter are way off compared to how many people have actually finished reading the fic...
Another thing is your spelling. I hate to be this blunt but it really sucks. The entire fic is riddled with misspellings and there are other glitches as well. Like the fact that irregular verbs seem to be an unheard-of phenomenom and the constant use of exclamation mark is annoying.
This is one of those fics that could have been very good indeed, if only the writer had had the sense of going it over with a spell check and preferably had a good beta to keep them from straying.

That was soooo COOL XD. I loved it.
But I want more *pouts* like Kaoru's turn to hurt Kozi and make him the uke hahaha XP
Ok, sorry anways ^ ^;; great story, thank you for posting it. @}----