AFF Fiction Portal
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
It was cute and short and adorable!

HAHA loved the whole 'swallow or spit' bit xD
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great idea...so cute..Mike is so sweet in this one!
person Kay
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... After reading your Candy Hearts story, I needed something funny to cheer me up. *Wipes tears from eyes.* Damn, that helped.

The line about Tre coming into their house... And asking them how the gangband went... Oh Lord. Porn. *Giggles quietly.*

You know, it's almost impossible to critique something when the story itself got you into an incredibly good mood.
person Faith
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. You're the best
person just another person
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic. Really well written. It could have been an awesome idea written really poorly, but you did a great job.
person ms-whirly
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheheee! I think I have an official favourite fic!!
And author!!
I loved it!!
*adds to favourites*
person tre_cool_is_my_homeboy129
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww! that was so cute. i love mikey. and billie. but especially mikey he's so damn sweet! but yay i really love it
person Aeris
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Another great story as usual! I can't wait to see some more from you!
person Rebel_whatsername
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me like.
person Sarah (KarmaKiller)
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're going to kill me. Is it even possible for you to get any better at this? Dear god.