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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great pic Ami!
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK that chapter confused the hell out of me. I think you need to clarify your transitions and time line - are we 18 yrs later???
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
of all the chapters of your story, i like this best. its so calm and ..."deep". before i thought, it all didn't really fit together-her behaviour(respecting a "no" should count for women, too, for example), his behaviour etc. but this chapter was really good. a quite meaningfull end to your story.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very sad and sweet all at once. *sniffs* Believe when I say I do truly love this story Ami.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oww horror.... this is so sad, poor Beth, all sick and alone (well not really alone..) *sobs*
You really are a good writer! Nice job... can't wait to read the rest!
Oh BTW: I lost some of my chapters too, there is something written about it if you go to the home page...
You really are a good writer! Nice job... can't wait to read the rest!
Oh BTW: I lost some of my chapters too, there is something written about it if you go to the home page...
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you make quite a lot of typing and spelling errors. I assume you type this up on a wp, using a spellcheck would be a good idea. Other than that interesting story (although a few weird inconsistencies).
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dang! Hot.. :)
I wondered how awkward it'll be when Rima arrived there..
I wondered how awkward it'll be when Rima arrived there..
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well it's interesting, two Alan fics updated same day, both with huge angsty things going on, both without sex!!!!! C'mon guys! OK well, I want more Alan, more m/f, and more sex. Please.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ppppplease please please update pretty please
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Who's the stupid person who rung them? Please please please update I love your fic.