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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE PHONE RANG!
hhehhehe.. *evil grin* wonder who's calling!
hhehhehe.. *evil grin* wonder who's calling!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love devious Alan, thanks for reviewing my story, I can't wait to read what's coming next. My life at this point is consisting of reading your story and writing my own. I wonder if you are English, I am not and sometimes I know what I want to write (in my own language) but I just cannot put it down in English, you seem to have no problems there. I absolutely adored this last chapter, don't let us wait too long for the rest!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfiction! It's one of the only ones I've read in all my years that actually sounds like a book or a real story rather than someone's excuse for smut, though Alan smut is always wonderful. I applaud you and look forward to the next chapter! Very frustrating, wonderful job!
Anya
Anya
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue!
This starting to sound interesting.. *nods*
The part where Beth pulled his towel make me almost roared with laughter!
WOOOHHOOO!
This starting to sound interesting.. *nods*
The part where Beth pulled his towel make me almost roared with laughter!
WOOOHHOOO!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!!! I was already excited when I saw chapter 9 up but to read it and find some ACTION too, well that just made my day.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no, interrupted by the phone. Do we need to guess who is on the phone and that this will quickly diffuse sexual situation? Bummer if that's the case. Quick, need to know, now!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is lovely.. :)
I like it :D
Oh, i forgot to ask.. Is it Rima that called Alan when the phone is active again?
The one that he said.. "Love you too.."
Is it?
I like it :D
Oh, i forgot to ask.. Is it Rima that called Alan when the phone is active again?
The one that he said.. "Love you too.."
Is it?
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story! It's mostly well written save for a few typos and spelling errors here and there...your characters are wonderful. Ah, and the smut...I hope that there's more where that came from!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, the characters both seem so real (which, I guess, they are). Your writing was quite emotive without being too emotive, you fe;t for the characters without feeling they were soppy and unrealistic. Good job, can't wait for more :D
I drew this, sorry if it doesn't much like your characters (I know it doesn't look much like Alan, but I just drew Ami how I imagined her).
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v139/ianua/Drawings/alanandami.jpg
Keep up the good work
Ianua xx
I drew this, sorry if it doesn't much like your characters (I know it doesn't look much like Alan, but I just drew Ami how I imagined her).
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v139/ianua/Drawings/alanandami.jpg
Keep up the good work
Ianua xx
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Very relaxing.. And it's very cute that Alan is so shy!