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by Ipsemes

person jbnik
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't fucking stop laughing at "SNAP!!!" "YOU BROKE IT!"
LMFAO!!!
Update SOOOOOOOOOON! Can't fucking wait for next part.
person warding_off_regrets
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious!

The cries of "you broke it!" and the term "weenie brace" are what really killed me.
Good God, does that ever sound painful, though.
Nice job! XD
person YouBrokeLikeGlass
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *takes deep breath* Poor Billie Joe! "YOU BROKE IT!" HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *breathes again* Oh God, can that really happen? I feel really bad for whoever that might happen to. But a ladder?! That`s the worst excuse ever! (Actually, I fell off a ladder once. Landed flat on my back. No one was around thank God. They might`ve taken me to a hospital.) But anyway, that was so fucking hilarious! God damn! Write on! "YOU BROKE IT!!!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!