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by larifoc

person Gerry's Protector
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lari,

You did a great job!! I have to agree with you on one thing, anything happens in Fan Fiction...
person Larissa
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Bonnie.

Dear, I am perfectly aware of that. But you must understand this is FICTION... unless you think Gerry would go out picking up whores or even strippers when he was horny. I highly doubt he'd do that. ;-)
In fiction, anything can happen.
Take care!

Larissa
person Bonnie
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is ok, but strippers arent allowed to have sex with customers and they arent allowed to have any physical contact at all with them either...
person Kitty Felone
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn... nice fic and great idea. This is new... it's not second person view.
person callen5
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where is this going? Interesting.
person janiceb
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What??????????????????? Are you going to update soon?
person Koda
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was good. ^^;
person Larissa
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reading it! I'll update tonight.
person Colleen
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start Larissa. Keep it going, and thanks!