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for Paint

by cryforthemoon

person I4eather
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was a little worried about the violence at first, but I sure loved how this turned out. The last chapter was really touching, I mean it. Nice intimate scenes too, felt really natural. This was a great read, thanks so much.
person Rammsteinchen
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an end! The guys aren't very nice, aren't they? But why did Olli do this? is there a deeper reason or was that only "fun"?
person Rammsteinchen
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oliver did the same to Richard? Holy shit! Will the band be destroyed now? Please, write! :)
person Rammsteinchen
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Paul is sweet! *smile* What will Till do?
person Rammsteinchen
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, another review with my bad English :)

I like that chapter very much, if you can say "like" for something like that. I think that it is very important to show how the victim feel after a abuse and you show these feelings very good.

I hope that you will write the third chapter soon!

person Musical Minefield
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

You have to write another chapter. My cliff has been hangered.

This fic is so... real. I really like it.
person Rammsteinchen
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is good and I would like to know how it goes on. Will Flake do anything against Oliver or will one of the band discover that? Please, write more!