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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh my.. What can I say, I love this story. :D Absolutely a gorgeous piece of work, really nicely done!
As for Patric, I had a hunch from the beginning that this might be happening, and I'm really glad that it's what happened! :D
I absolutely love both Mr. Rickman and Mr. Oldman, and I'm happy to see you chose to take Gary into the storyline aswell, although to me (a devoted GO-fan for nearly a decade) you made Gary sound more like Sirius, rather than his OOC self. Nonetheless, that was just an absolutely minor con that I spotted.
Looking forward to see you writing more, not checked yet what other stories you're written but I will. ;)
As for Patric, I had a hunch from the beginning that this might be happening, and I'm really glad that it's what happened! :D
I absolutely love both Mr. Rickman and Mr. Oldman, and I'm happy to see you chose to take Gary into the storyline aswell, although to me (a devoted GO-fan for nearly a decade) you made Gary sound more like Sirius, rather than his OOC self. Nonetheless, that was just an absolutely minor con that I spotted.
Looking forward to see you writing more, not checked yet what other stories you're written but I will. ;)
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you finished this gem of a story, I had been wondering when you were going to update this and to my surprise a few days ago I find you had. I just finished reading it and I absolutely loved it! Now if only I can get off my butt and finish mine, you think I could borrow your muse for a bit? :) Thought it was really sweet when she introduced him to his son what a surprise. I will say it again this is a FANTASTIC story! BRAVO!!
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first non Harry Potter fic I have reviewed and I am glad I did! I can imagine this storyline happening...And a little bit of me would kill to be Kate!..LOL. Will you be updating again?
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never read real person stuff, nor do I read fics with OCs but this was fantastic! A very believable and heartfelt story. You have a great way of writing- it's very concise and you have an excellent sense of pace. I liked the David and Gary cameos too- I can totally imagine them acting like that!
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alan's such an ass. lol I love the new chapter, but he is an ass. A selfish one.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you updated!!!! I had a hunch and checked the story and there was a new chapter. It was a very sweet chapter, dancing the night away. Oh how I wish I could trade places with Kate just for the night. I can't wait for more.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read through the story again, I can't belive I forgot how good it is..
Will you ever update? I don't want to sound pushy, but I'd just love to read on..
Will you ever update? I don't want to sound pushy, but I'd just love to read on..
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you must update before I die. :D
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really nice story, thank you for the experience!
I liked how you portrayed Alan's vulnerability!
For one moment I thought it was Rima in the dark room (of course, she was too young to be Rima) :-)
I liked Gary as a character, too. You've got some great funny lines too, like: “Gary, you would smell sex in a convent.” lol
Great work! I love Alan and it doesn't hurt to let our imagination linger a bit sometimes, does it?
Take care
jane
I liked how you portrayed Alan's vulnerability!
For one moment I thought it was Rima in the dark room (of course, she was too young to be Rima) :-)
I liked Gary as a character, too. You've got some great funny lines too, like: “Gary, you would smell sex in a convent.” lol
Great work! I love Alan and it doesn't hurt to let our imagination linger a bit sometimes, does it?
Take care
jane
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that was totally HOT!!!!!!!!!!