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i can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the good work. :)

Hello there! I thought I'd leave a little note to tell you that I enjoyed reading your story. There are many nice images there and I think it's strongest feature is the rhythm of the plot. The cliffhangers are very well dispatched throughout the chapters, and it really keeps the reader wanting to read more. In my humble opinion, some parts are a tad too romantic, but hey, it's supposed to be, in a way, it's Rickman prose after all. Careful with your French, though; there are some mistakes, and there are orthographical mistakes as well (e.g., "of" for "off" on many occasions). I found the accident episode very clever, though M. Rickman would never play young Snape himself; I expect someone else will play that part in movie 5... and, as Sirius is young in that scene, too, he would not be dressed in a filthy outfit; he would be dressed Hogwarts-like, just like Severus (hence no black cloak at the hospital). I also wanted to point out that, in many aspects, you have portrayed the post-traumatic stress disorder typical reactions very well, even if the attraction between them is still left too unexplained (a woman who has been through what she has been through would have been far, far more distrustful at the beginning; she would not trust someone implicitly like that for no apparent reason). I particularly liked her reaction to the reporter; I thought it was very believable and dead on. But someone who has been traumatised like that will definitely keep in mind that the man she loves has been unfaithful to his partner... and, therefore, might also be unfaithful to her. Just a thought. Happy writing, and I'll certainly read your updates!

AAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cliffhangers! I hate cliffhangers! Please hurry and update soon. I can't wait to see how Katie fights back.
-Katie

hey. i am in love with ur story. i check everyday to see if there has been a new chapter posted and i cant wait for the next one. keep up the great work because i am devoted to ur writing. :D love jo

OK, I don't hate you any more! Now, I only hate you for leaving it there! Please please please update soon!

Mmm... Exquisite. If there is one person i love after Severus Snape, it's Alan Rickman! Keep it up!

That's lovely Mizzlizzie!
I almost cry.. When i read the line "I'll fight for you"..
Gonna be waiting for your next update.

Very good chapter as usual Lizzie!

Just one little thing..... Instead of "where", it should be "were". For example, instead of "People where heading home," it should be "People were heading home."

Other than that, I LOVED it!

Go Kate! Fight for your man! lol (No disrepect intended) Chapter was really awesome and the fact that Gary is being so obvious at being a matchmaker *Grins* Can't wait for you to update again my dear.

AHHHHH!!! Thank you sooo much for finally updating. I think I've been checking the page every day, just becuse you might maybe update though. It's so wonderful. Okay, I'm totally blank now what else to write because *squee* is pretty much everything I'm thinking right now. But update soon, ya?