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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really liked this fic. :DD So long oneshot (featuring Kaoru and Kyo) and so well written. Please do write more Kaoru/Kyo-fanfiction!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
zera loves submissive kyo too... and im sure kao too lol
loved the story. well written and very funny
nice one, keep it up
loved the story. well written and very funny
nice one, keep it up
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! o.o I liked this! ^_^ I have to rush cause I'll have to leave for work in a bit, but yes o.o This was definitely good ^_^ You've improved greatly!^_^ You should write more!^_^
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome! Way better than the first... Very realistic and different. Not like all the others on this site where it's just like all the little 14-year-olds just copied off of each other and changed the names... SUGOI!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
submissive kyo is needed more. it was very cute of you to have it with kyo in a halloween costume. a slap fight with revlon now that's an interesting thought. very good. leaves pocky cookies and pumpkinpie.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D KaoruxKyo is always good, ne?
I like submissive Kyo too ^___^
Please, this is great, so, write more, I beg you!
Continue!
I like submissive Kyo too ^___^
Please, this is great, so, write more, I beg you!
Continue!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=O! Decated to me?! X33
Good lord that was great, you truely are getting better at Yaoi. Much better than the first time I tried to write Yaoi...
I loved the slap fight with revlon xD I could see Kyo doing that too >.> And he surely did get his trick and treat in.. lucky butt.
I give it a 10 out of 10 plus lots of cookies .::Showers Skry with cookies::. And I didnt see any errors either.
Good lord that was great, you truely are getting better at Yaoi. Much better than the first time I tried to write Yaoi...
I loved the slap fight with revlon xD I could see Kyo doing that too >.> And he surely did get his trick and treat in.. lucky butt.
I give it a 10 out of 10 plus lots of cookies .::Showers Skry with cookies::. And I didnt see any errors either.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! XD Good one this fic ! And I love Kyo submissive !! ** And more if it's with Kaoru !!!