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for Lost in New York COMPLETE

by JDLady

person Archaic Romance
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, simply and purely. Exquisite. I loved it!
person mar1966
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found it! I love it this way and the Mort way too!

Excellent!
person everlong
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can't even begin to imagine my excitement when I saw that you'd completed this. Beyond that, it is inexplicable how elated I was when it was just as well-written and clever and HOT as it started out to be. Well done.
person depp kid
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was like um sooooo good...
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good there, please continue
person dramaced
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, but too short!!! Great sex, so of course more of that but I want more of them talking, comparing notes, and her observations of him, too.
person Susie Q
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! ARE YOU SURE ITS COMPLETE?
person lili
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
of course!

i like your story.

i wanna know whats gotten johnny so sad :(

pleeeease continue!
person ME
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start! I can't wait for more!
person everlong
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD if you don't update I'll have a fucking seizure. This is seriously one of the best pieces I've ever read on this site: just the right amount of detail, good grammar, perfect plot (as much as there can be in a story that will eventually lead to sex, anyway...) I'm dying here. I want the rest of this! Soon!