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by Ipsemes

person Olivia
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"This was no gentle love making. This was fucking at its finest. No romance, no candles, true Green Day style. On the floor atop a pile of cupcakes half dressed and still wearing their Converse."

Ohmygoodness. Marry me! That is one of the funniest, best lines I've ever read. Great writing style! Whoa...this is great. Nice job.
person Aeris
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious I loved it! Though that changes the wy I see cupcakes now...
person Kaylene
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was funny stuff....hehe. I'm never gonna be able to look at cupcakes in the same way ever again.
person Rebel_whatsername
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY! What do you think you're doing leaving it like that!?!? I demand that you continue this now!!! WRITE MORE DAMN YOU! Pretty please?