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for Learning to Communicate

by CollisionStar

person Me
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I do not know when you posted this story, and I must admit that at first I didn't want to read it, but I'm glad that you did. It's absolutely amazing. I actually think that you captured some of Frank's and Gerard's real-life personalities as well, which is astounding. You made some spelling errors, and normally I'm a sucker for those. I hate it when people misspell in stories. But this time I found I didn't mind because the plot was just that good. Seriously. It amazed me. I really hope that you post the next chapter soon, 'cause I'm waiting. You actually left me wanting to know what happens next. I applaud your talent. Good job.
person lil loz
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO bring him back, dammit! update soon!!!!!!
person This Razor Roamance
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!! Duuuuuuddddeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! Update soon.
person Helena
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ack! no frankie! ugh, update soon! please?
person Emi
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG. wow please please please update soon you cant just stop it right there . Ahh! Now thats gonna bug me . PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lindsey
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG NO!!!! come back frankie! i love this story! post another chapter soon! MUAHS!
Lindz
person chemical_trigger
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww noway poor frankie! and poor gerard... ohkay i dont know who to feel sorry for..but poor them..come back frank ...grunt bring him back *do it *shakes fist
person poe
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!! COME BACK FRANKIE! COME BACK! HE DIDN'T MEAN IT! REALLY HE DIDN'T! ack!!!! he has to come back!!!!!!! gerard is going to go find him and everything is going to be okay. i know it. it will. but you should really update soon.
person Cherrylips
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Mikey faked it.

Wonderful first words.

Where is that goodlooking subhuman off too? o__o
person ... O.O
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT?!

I knew you were evil, but Jeebus.... You skank!