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for After show party

by Haru28

person yami990
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please please add more to this one soon. leaves cookies brownies pumpkinpie and pocky.
person tightlacegirl
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lemony naughtiness.. poor Shinya... LOL!
person Kashshaptu (too lazy to sign in)
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god o.o this is so hot! o.o and so naughty! drumstick love! *_* I can't wait to read more!!!
person Rachel
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, You have a lot of grammar issues...for example "Shinya hanged up the phone" it should be "hung" things like that, good plot though...