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for Breaking the haze

by CherubChild

schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep going this is cute~!
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Make me happy, continue!
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. Please continue!
person Valo
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ieeeeee. More, please?

-x-Valo
person shiela
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy...I love the shirt chapter too...they are wonderful.
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dances* You finally updated! First off...I love it because I love all Jon/Munky.

One thing, there's just a few formatting errors, some stuff missing quotes, that's about it.

Owie...poor Jon, no lube? That's a true masochist. :D

I'm hoping that you'll be writing more, I love your stuff.
person Le Petit Mort
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* More? Please?
person Nay
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's all!!! *whines impatiently* More!

You kind of changed around the narative here...it was odd. Try to stick to just one narative style.
person Vegetable Sock Ferret
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i love you
person Nay
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job babe! Very sexy... ^.^

Lucky girl, you got to meet the boys. Congrats to you though!

*sits and stares with big puppy eyes* More pwetty pwease?