rate_review Reviews

Please go back to writing this story. It's amazing.

Uh...the lyrics are by the Foo Fighters.

Sorry...I just realized my last review was rather rude. I love the story but the music geek in me came out for a moment. I haven't even finished it and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I just discovered this story this week-end, please go on with it, it's adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but i still wonder that there are people out there who would really not recognize this gorgious scott...especially since 300 ;-)
sabine

Hey, I love your story n your style, so plz dont stop writin ;) would be great to read more chapters!! Take care xx

I hope I'm not the only one that is still reading this excellent piece.As promised , I'm posting again.I haven't gone back to re-read the chapters. Has anything changed? I like them as they were. As I noted before, you are a gifted writer. In the latest chapter you wrote alot without being too obvious. This gives the reader the power to use their own mind to feel out the characters. It is a much more affective way of writing, I really disike too much unnecessary fluff.IMHO.Keep it up, even if I'm the only one reading, you have my undivided attention.

Beautiful! Read this when it was first posted, have been lurking ever since.Very happy to see that you decided to continue writing, hope you will finish. Though you have a real knack for hot and steamy sex, the characters and their relationship are developing with the same fervor.Keep up the excellent writing, I will keep posting.

perfection!

i just stumbled upon your story about a long-time crush of mine - GB - and all I can say is WOW! YOur story is HOT HOT HOT HOT! But what makes it really stand out is how different it is. I love that it's set in England (not many are, or they aren't written by someone who seems to have first-hand knowledge of living there), that was hot sex at the beginning, but then she backs off and really makes him wait, and finally it sounds real without being gross. So many stories are living entirely in their own fantasies, no reality (*grin*, a certain amount of fantasy is essential of course) - but for example as he is about to sink into her (in the first chapter) he has to find her opening. I love your story and I will be checking back to get the rest. Keep it up and keep it hot! (as if you've had any problem in that area)
Thanks!

Come on, pleeeease (that's whining)!