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for On fire

by Kat1975

person Luv
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 14 chapters and this is GOOD STUFF! Whew! I've written a few Gerry fics in my day, and read tons of them, and I can say without hesitation that this is one of the best I've ever read. Hot, Hot, Hot!!
Nicely done!
person rebecca
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice! let her be vulnerable. let him help her. let it be nice for a change. why can't anybody have happy perfect stories? you know, a little escape? get on with the great sex already and why does she not yet know his profession?
very nice keep it up.
person Mona
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. She seems like a different person from the girl in chapter 1. The sexy chick in the club would never have been such a klutz to crack her head open. It's also out of character for Gerry to set rules about not touching, especially after the club scene. Oh and the jerk-off scene was too gross.
person Gaps of Misery
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very different, I agree, but it's really good. Plus it fits into the story, so WOW!!! *lol* I'm amazed!! :)
person rebecca
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes!
make it nice
continue!
person Random Reader
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 was lovely! I thoroughly enjoyed it! It's a bit odd that Tamsin doesn't know that he's an actor, but I'm sure there's a good explanation :)
person Em
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really beautiful. By far the best chapter so far.
person Random Reader
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hallelujah!! Yes yes yes!!!!
person Random Reader
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is he calling Rachel? Why didn't they have sex even if both wanted to? Why didn't she pull a sicky when The Gerard Butler was staying over at her place? Argh, I don't understand this woman??!!!!! Sorry, just showing how much I'm pulled into this story... I guess it's not going to be easy for our beloved couple... Please keep on writing, love to see where this is going. Yes please, I want more!!
person rebecca
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes!!!
ok ok keep going you are on the right track!!