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by Kat1975

person Gaps of Misery
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I definitely want more!! *lol* The last few paragraphs were pretty dark and sad, but very, very good. Hope you'll continue in a mixture like that cuz I absolutely love this story!!! :)
person rebecca
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rachel? Rachel? where did that come from ??

No No get back on track
person heather
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it darling! I couldn't ask for a better Gerry fanfic! Looking forward to more...
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Start doing a really terrible chapter, so I can give you some flames, too! *lol* Just kidding... this update is as good as the others before it were, so please, please more!! I absolutely love it!! :) And it looks like we could get some pretty hot smut in the next chapter... ;)
person alex
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this I love it SO much! Your writing is so natural and enjoyable to read. I've been checking 3 times a day for an update on your story, how's that for addicted haha. Anyway you didn't disappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Gaps of Misery
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I already did the survey, don't worry. Was kinda fun anyway since I love doing polls and that stuff. :) As for the chapter... well, pretty, pretty realistic. And it even was pretty in its own kinda way. ;) I think I definitely like your style and how everything develops, so please continue!!! :)
person heather
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I LOVE IT! PLease please please don't let it end there!
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I thought that'd be just another one-night-fling in the beginning, but already after the second chapter you convinced me it's much better and much, much more than that! ;) It was a great idea (also in your style) to make the first few chapters so differently to the newer ones. Not giving them any names made everything more neutral and distant... it just created the right feeling for it. Now, however, it's getting more personal, and it also got to me somehow, so I'm truly looking forward to your next chapters cuz I think your story is amazing!!! :) Please go on!!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was amazing. What a lucky girl she is.
person phantomskye
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh shit!!!!!

update soon!!!!

awesome I love it...