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Just finished reading all 10 stories and I absolutely love them! I especially liked whenever Ewan showed up. ''Come on, dearie, eat the nasty piece of fruit'' and ''I'm a father. My wife made sure I know these things'' was the perfect comic relief needed amidst all the (sexual) tension. Great work!

And here it ends.. how sad... I'll check the other stuff you've written some day.
Good job.

Everything I've ever found here so far has been crap and I honestly thought that this one might be too.. And what a surprise I was in for.. oh god..
This is one of the hottest fics I've ever read.
Great job. Really fantastic.
Gotta read the next chapter.. see ya

*rubs tummy* I'm a happy camper now! After waiting for the conclusion for so flippin' long, it feels nice and warm to finally get closure.

AMAZING, as always. I'm your biggest Natalie/Hayden fanfiction fan. YEP.

Hey, sorry it's taken me so long to get this review up. Anyway, as usual you never cease to impress the hell out of me! How do you continue to write sex scene after sex scene without getting repetetive or boring with the most repetetive and sometimes boring act there is?!
So what's next? Are you going to continue with "The War" or "You Still Can't Control Destiny", or just start on a new project?

Incredible. You absolutely have the gift of words. This might be the most perfect example of a romantic fanfiction I have ever read, and believe me, I've read a lot. I call myself a writer as well, but I pale in comparison. Truly an excellent story.

Thank God for an update! I totally thought you dropped this fic! I was so sad.

Skylin... I don't know who the hell she is but she's so damned hateful.

I like the way you keep Hayden honest about lusting after Skylin - you didn't make it fluffy in that department.

I can't wait till Natalie stakes her claim for good. I like the way you characterized her as an stratergically innocent vixen. Good show!

where is ch 4? you say its up but i dont see one!

Wow! You do such a great job! The idea of Hayden being jealous at his bro...just perfect. And thanks for getting rid od Skylin she was really anoying! Really good story, keep going!

Chapter 4 was really great, although I noticed that there is two different versions of this story up on the site, since it was "story of the year". The other one is under the title "Staking MY Claim" instead of "Staking HER Claim". Anyway, I think the chapter you tried to add onto this story got added onto the other version as chapter 2. Not sure how that happened, but I thought you'd like to know since your many fans are probably seeing this "Chapter Four Now Added" update, and then clicking on the story to find that it's not there! Both versions are posted in your author's bio, but not in the celeb fan fiction section.

Sorry if I'm babbling on about stuff you're already aware of.