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you are goin to finish this fic arent you? i really hope so! this story is so cute....how nat and hayden keep chasing each other back and forth. :] i cant wait to read the rest! plz update SOON!

And he should play with whomever he wants to. Great chapter, :-)

I have no idea who Skylin is, but shit, I hate her. Grrr...I like how they don't say anything to each other, its so hot that way. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE dialogue, but I've never seen a story like this before. Congrats, you're a pioneer.

wow pensfan yet another excellent job! keep up the great work, as u always do

Oh, Bonnie, what an absolutely GORGEOUS chapter. I want to be on that holiday doing all tht. I am sooooo looking forward to the next chapter :D

Hurrah! Another triumph!

The cuddling parts were very sweet and well done.

I can't wait to find out what happens in St. Kitts and with Skylin!! Thanks for the amazing update!!

Spank me for not saying so MUCH sooner; but I LOVE every single one of your fics! I've not published anything here, but you've inspired me to write my own stories. (total Mary-Sue, but I guess you start somewhere, right?) I've felt guilty for a long time (at least since this past summer) that I haven't posted any kind of review, comment, nothing. I hope you'll forgive a total stranger. lol..please? And thank you for feeding my obsession with Hayden. MWAH!!!

BTW, if you're not aware of it, there's a lovely website out there run by Kelly [url]http://www.haydenchristensendrive.com[/url] swing by the forum sometime. Once you're there for a week, the 'hidden' board becomes available. hehehe...amazing that so many 'older' women drive themselves crazy over this young stud, but we do!

This story is just too exciting!! Extremely hot sex AND game that gets you excited?!

I was glad to see an update at this great story, but now you left hanging I can't wait to read the rest. What has he plan? Oh and when will they talk about it?