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for Staking Her Claim - COMPLETED!

by pensfan100

person michellle
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good! I can't wait to read what natalie has up her sleeves. update soon.
person darkstorm888
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty fuckin good so far! keep it up
person Caz
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2/ Bloody hell!. That one earned a MEGA WOW!!! :D
person Blazing Fire
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had me laughing at the last part. I couldn't only imagine if that really happened. Great work. Keep it up.
person Mouse
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You don't update often...but you've got sex in every chapter, and for that I am truly grateful!
Again, congrats on story of the year.
person Mouse
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on story of the year! You deserve it!
person mshc
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story from a great author yet again!! please updat soon!!
person Monkey
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I loved it!! A sneaky bitchy aggressive Natalie...I REALLY LOVE IT! More Please
person Stag
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
N.P. being conniving and malicious. -evil laugh- Whoever said little Harvard graduate Jewish girls were nice?
person Caz
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! This was FANTASTIC!! so well written and sexcriptive, and just downright HORNY! I think Pensfan has found a serious competitor, because you are as brilliant as she is at writing this couple.. Hope there is more to come. I'd love to see either a continuation of this or just about anything else you can drum up for us rabid fans :-D