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for Of Gold Velvet and White Pyramids

by VanillaMint

person Erzulie
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Give me more KaoruXKyo, and I'll keep reading : x
person Fulya
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh' Loving it! it is awesome! please do update soon ^______^

I personally am in love with the kyoxkaoru love...*sigh* would like to see more of it XD *giggle*
person DanSan
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D:D:D
I liked the third chapter... KaoruxKyo goodness!!!
Bless you!
Continue!
person Nolah de Fanel
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter....poor Kyo.
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shinya. And Kyo, too! Are Kaoru and Die going to be evil though the hole thing? Maybe evil is the wrong word? Well, anyway. It seems Totchi and Kaoru are pretty close. *wink wink* I really love this story! Keep going! ^^
person nitzi
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a new chapter!!
I hope Kyo gets back at Toshiya for telling him on...
And I wonder if Shinya will be able to break free... thrilling! Please update soon!
person yami990(toolazy to sign in)
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please continue. leaves pocky and pumpkinpie.
person Cassie
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I simply loved your new chapter! If only there were a way for poor Kyo to get revenge on Kaoru! I wonder what Die would do if he found out what happened to his adviser! I can't wait to read lots more! ^__~
person Sakuchan
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this ff please more!!!
I can't wait for Kyo.........don't you have any ideas for a certain threesome with...let me think.....KyoKaoruDie? Just three names..... ^^;;;
Seriously,I really like the way you write ^^
I hope I'll be able to read something more by you!
Good job!
person Sakuchan
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah! I've just posted and I see a new chapter here *_*
One very very beautiful chapter,I have to say *loves KxK ff*
I like the background too ^^ It's quite unusual,compliments!
Please more!
Good job!