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for Of Gold Velvet and White Pyramids

by VanillaMint

person Cassie
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an awesome story so far! The room got very hot in the first and second chapters! I can't wait to read more and find out what happens between all of them! I know Kyo is Shinya's friend but what else is he like is he Die's butler I hope you clear that up for me! ^__~
person Nolah de Fanel
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for the next chapter...the imagery in this is so gorgeous **fans self** and the sex...wroar.
person yami990(toolazy to sign in)
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please continue. this has me addicted to your work. leaves pocky and pumpkinpie.
person nitzi
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter! *happy*
How do you always manage to get this thrill into Die's and Shinya's relationship without letting them seem to be too much OOC? *envy*
And Toshiya's slutty behaviour is just love...^^
person Myu
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;-; you took forever to update!!!! I like it, best ToshiyaxShinya fic I've ever read. oooo pocky -nibbles-

<3 from : Myu
person nitzi
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally a new story from you!!! *yay*
I love the first chapter, sounds promising ^///^
person yami990(toolazy to sign in)
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this is good. not often you find them in egypt for a story but in this case it makes it better. please continue. leaves pocky.
person Sakuchan
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please more,this ff promises to be a really good one!
I wonder who maters who...... *loves master/slave ff*
Good job! ^o^
person Kashshaptu (too lazy to sign in)
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love totch and shin together! They're so naughty and playful! I need more of this! You write such good stories!^_^
person katie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! MUST HAVE MORE!